5. We felt this piece has a clearish theme (the oil spill?), but it does not seem to make any comment on that theme. In addition, the overall color scheme, the oddly colored hand, the out of place bird, the background, and the awkward diagonal layout could all be improved in order to visually hold it together.
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We felt this piece has a clearish theme (the oil spill?), but it does not seem to make any comment on that theme. In addition, the overall color scheme, the oddly colored hand, the out of place bird, the background, and the awkward diagonal layout could all be improved in order to visually hold it together.
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